Talk:Yamakaze/@comment-26081387-20161120061029/@comment-208.107.32.54-20161120064221

Oh, huh, I didn't even notice it was まあ and not もう. That definitely makes more sense.

And yeah, I went ahead and changed the Night Battle and Minor Damage lines too. I was considering both of those translations, but I wasn't sure if that was the meaning for the 沈めば lines or I was misintrepreting it.

For her Major Damage, I'm not entirely sure what would be appropriate for english, so I went ahead with "I hate this!". Literally translating the だから sounds weird to me, but I can't think of a better way to put it when she's taking heavy damage.

And for the Library, it was a little harder to translate for me, so if you've got an improvement for that one feel free to make it. It looks rough to me, since I wasn't 100% on a few parts. My Japanese is only barely good enough to do Yamakaze's quotes, so I'm surprised I didn't hit any lines I didn't understand at all.