User blog comment:Arvin30p/Unnumbered Chapters 03: The Strange pairs/@comment-203.106.67.128-20160808044417

I was kinda hoping to see more parts to the Haruna bit, I feel she gave up too easily. Even if it's because she knows Hiro only sees Hiei as a potential significant other more than he can look at her that way, I was hoping she'd be more depressed as she gave in to Hiro's resistance. Or maybe it's the... insane part of me as a writer who wants to see it happen that way.

I take it that she'll soon fall to the background as you focus on your stuff, though, so yeah I figure I can see why you wrote it that way.

Also, hey, your concept of AD Hime's appearance before Hiro here is interesting. I've been thinking of doing something like this but on a different method. I still have to use the hint of Adm. Tadano's master appearing soon though, since he is the main culprit on how Tadano even became a TTK in first place.

Oh yeah and I need to write about the two torpedo les-- Oh no it's not my favorite term, let me just stick with "torpedo cruisers" then.

Either way, I look forward to reading even more.

(Also yeah since I namedropped my characters here, might as well say that I'm currently away from my PC to meet up with some people after their classroom hours.)