User blog comment:ToastSoul/Cape Kaga/@comment-36.234.156.225-20160412025847/@comment-36.234.156.225-20160412060622

Indeed, I am not doubt about your translation. I just tried to make it more like lyrics, i.e., more poetic. And there are some conjunctive words in the oringinal Japanese lyrics.

But anyway, I would like to  thank your contribution as well :).