User blog comment:ToastSoul/Cape Kaga/@comment-36.234.156.225-20160412025847

I would like to suggest another version of translation, I believe that is slightly closer than the original lyric.

The fukusa passed in these hands, the colour of a dying autumn

If I open these eyes, could see the face

I could flap these wings and overcome the stormy seas for you

If our fingers would intertwine and you would hold me close

Then I will not fear even the blazing ocean

Release these wings and advance into the sky of battles

You and I, if we shoot these arrows, right

The hazy moonlit night is beautiful, isn't it

In the battle of this night

Even facing difficulties, I shall never give in

After all, it is the heart of a woman

This feeling of adoring, I would hold close to my chest

This would be enough for me

As long as this feeling of mine would remain

Facing the ocean, making a wish

This is the pride of a million koku:

Cape Kaga

The glove these fingers touched still remains warm

If I leave this feeling in heart and look ahead

I could fold these wings, return to home port

Despite with the willing that must kill every enemy

I still have some weakness in my heart that I do not wish to show

The young cranes fly towards the sea of battles as well

The first arrow, the second arrow, if we shoot these arrows, right

It would be so simple, however

In this battle

I cannot let my guard down, I should not be able

After all, it is the heart of a woman

This feeling of adoring, I would hold close to my chest

I would be fine just this way, as long as something could remain

Facing Mount Akagi, making one wish

These are the prayers of a million koku: Cape Kaga

You and I, if we would be together

The falling sakura are beautiful, aren't they

In the battle of this night as well

I could never concede again once more

After all, it is the heart of a woman

One wish, that I hold close to my chest

This would be enough for me

As long as this feeling of mine would remain

The feeling of adring that I would never forget

This is the pride of a million koku:

Cape Kaga