Talk:Land Base Aerial Support/@comment-34880392-20180422102457

Hi, I am planning to edit a small part of subsection about Enemy Raid (http://kancolle.wikia.com/wiki/Land_Base_Aerial_Support#Enemy_Raid_2)

My suggestion is here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fIiKyRfzda0fX4EqFfBvOXW21MAS3qRyCFEzhMo8m2w/edit?usp=sharing

It contains a new but important issue (which I think has already been confirmed), so I am asking here whether it is advisable to directly edit this page (or I should ask somebody whether it is convincing or not).