Talk:Unryuu/@comment-24978536-20140808172640/@comment-25286380-20140810020920

For the art, that's an easy answer. Look at her abdominal area.

Before remodelling, look at her stomach. She's leaning extremely far forward. Then look at her head placement / size. It's placed as if she was standing straight up despite her back being EXTREMELY bent. In other words. Her spine is shaped like "C". In her damaged CG, her head tilt is unnatural. (Your head can be tilted that way, and in that position, but it's most definitely uncomfortable).

Her Kai CGs are better, but are inconsistent about her waist. (She looks about average waist-wise in normal art, then suddenly when she's damaged, her stomach bloats up).

And that's ignoring the overlying problem where it seemed like the artist fused 4-5 girls together, and got a mess. None of the colors work well together.