Talk:Intrepid/@comment-37.223.42.186-20180222210030

As a reward for a hard-fought campaign, it is a poor design. Yes I am talking only about the shipgirl art, not the stats, those are fine. The head-to height ratio being correct if you are going for a more realist artstyle, is ok, but it is less ok if on it's enviroment that's not the usual (which is less heads to full height than her) so it stands out in a "this looks strange" way. I had seen it before knowing there was even issues with her, and felt it was too small a head for the habitual. Face wise is ok, if not for the feeling that probably it is gonna be a "you are gonna see it 23 times more" sooner or later (yeah, artwise fubuki and company... meh). The riging is ok, I just like it more when it is integrated more seamless-y onto the clothes (hair complements should be part of the riging, dammit) and not all that busy(it looks even busier than real life intrepid in ww2). Cloth-wise it is too reminiscent of the japanese aircraft carriers, it needs more diferentiation; it doesn't work as it's distinctiveness isn't enough it repeats too much,  the armour as apron for example, and the general feeling of Kaga/akagi/our dear BBV's. Colorwise it needs more of the blues that the Intrepid badge has.

It's not bad (the ratio being the great culprit here, I am sure even you guys who really like the design can see that) but as a reward of an event...it's too bland. Now, if we are talking about an event that is supposedly the end of pre-change kancolle (Dunno about that,I just read your comments) it gets worse, and notwithstanding people doing stupid things like threats or insulting, it is normal there is controversy.

As a side note, don't the lower legs look too skinny in normal art compared to the damaged one?

P.S: I dislike guns as catapults u.u. Whoever does the art.

P.S2: Sorry for any strange phrasing.