User blog comment:ShizenReborn/A guide for complete newcomers/@comment-25637142-20151107163803

Shizen, obvious grammar errors can be checked by any competent grammar checker such as...MS Word, you might want to try putting your text through a checker next time...
 * We have "in a nutshell" (idiom) and "This is only an introduction" or "For starters", we don't have "This is only the a nutshell of something".
 * Mind your plural/singular nouns and their articles "a/an/the/this/that/these/those" or their ending "s/es" (torpedoes).
 * Also, mind the difference between "because of" and "because"
 * Mind the difference between -ing adjectives and -ed adjectives (complicated)
 * "That's mean" -- I don't even...
 * "Bomber deal", "This mean" -- Shizen, please
 * "Alway" -- okay, I'll stop now

For the content, errr...assuming that will inevitably happen if people just read your blog and assume this is all the information they need to play KC, how did you get by 8 long months on natural regen only? Must have been tough on your girls. How many ship have you sunk btw?

And that's just scratching the surface...

P/s: it's "opening strike" not "open strike"