Talk:Spring 2015 Event/@comment-176.112.74.62-20150417063611

Some small things about the translation.

In the first part:

"同作戦を成功させることでイタリア艦娘などの新艦娘と邂逅可能となります. "

Instead of "If you succeed in this Operation you may encounter the Capital-tier Italian Shipgirl.", I would translate this as:  " If you succeed in this Operation you may encounter new shipgirls, such as the new Italian one." - I think that this is the more accurate tranlation of " などの", although it doesn't matter anyway in this situation, because the second part of text mentions that there are going to be multiple shipgirls. Also, in the first part of text there's no information about her being Capital-tier, it's only in the third part.

In the third part:

" 本作戦を成功させることで、大型主力艦級のイタリア艦娘などの新艦娘と邂逅可能です. "

Instead of " If you succeed in this event, you may encounter the Capital-tier Italian Shipgirl.",  "If you succeed in this Operation you may encounter the new shipgirls such as the new Capital-tier Italian one." - Same as above.