Talk:Hatsuzuki/@comment-27901418-20160302075439

I noticed a couple few translation errors in nightbattle, 15;00, 16:00 and 17:00 hrs lines. not sure who to report this too but just in case ill write my suggestions below

Night battle  she says, 望むところだ, (lit id just been hoping for it) i suggest changing it to 'fine by me' or something along those lines, 'just my luck' sounds like she is complaining that she has to NB when she doesnt want to

15:00, isuzu gives her konpeito AND water, the water has been left out in the english

16:00 she says よくしてくれる she has been kind to me/treating me well etc, not よく知っている(i know her well)

17;00　  昂ぶ る　is close to gets excited, worked up, in anticipation etc. the translation 'acting up' sounds like her guns are defective.