Talk:Iowa/@comment-26751061-20160222164038/@comment-460323-20160222193159

Other than the very questionable choice of words (Building, Engage Ring, ...So Ready Go??), I don't think there's anything wrong with it grammatically. Which is why it doesn't quite makes sense to stick with the spoken English words if it causes the translation to be grammatically incorrect. Having heard the voice tho, future USN ships really need to use less English words in their lines.

Then again, I'm not a native speaker of either language so I might be missing something.