Talk:Yamakaze/@comment-26081387-20161120061029/@comment-208.107.32.54-20161120070533

Your translation is definitely more correct than mine, and it's more obvious about the line concerning the 24th Destroyer Squad. If you don't mind, I'll just put your translation over top of mine to make it much more readable.

And yeah, the first time I translated it (then lost my translation accidentally) I included her tic, but I left it out the second time around since it was a little obnoxious to repeat in English. Although since it's just her recollecting a story, it works fine in Japanese.