Talk:Ayanami/@comment-5046483-20140622210850/@comment-66.133.226.3-20140626071720

Thanks for the translation, and I found couple suggesions (sorry I don't know how to edit)

for 1600 hourly, "綾波、こう見えて狙った敵は逃しません" lierally means "Ayanami, despite how I am looked, would never let (any) enemies escape once I aim at them". so, it could be "Ayanami won't let enemy ships escape"(perhaps too strong tone for Ayanami...maybe you can write it down in softer tone). Latter part should be something like "Commander, I propose some sorties." Ayanami is saying this sentence in very formal militaristic way, so if "I propose" is informal in military, especially when subordinate is giving officer his opinion, please use the proper words.