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That's a heckload of list you got there Mat. Appreciate your comments, most of the comments seems to go to the table.

Anything here that is last edited by Fujihita I'll just say Fuji and let him explain why he did that.

Paragraph: I read over it and agreed on what you said. However, Fuji was the last editor so I do want his opinion before I start doing something.

Links: Many links were put in "See also" section. The explanation for resources seems a bit excessive since it seems like a basic foundation that they probably know before reading this page...but a link to the tutorial can be put if it is still needed to be spoon-fed.

Page Layout & Pictures: Fuji

Expedition Return Bubble: That can be done, I actually forgot to put that in. I'll say put in the middle of Sending a fleet on expedition before "the first fleet can't go on expedition" and make that part "Returning on expedition" (Not new section just a paragraph).

Reorganizing "Sending a Fleet on Expedition": I'm still a bit lost on your explanation so if you can explain it again it would help (or if Fuji knows what you mean).

Morale: Agreed on what you said. However, I put it on the note under "Sending...Expedition" because the next section "recalling an expedition" mentions morale. I can put it there but I thought having a link to the Morale/Fatique page there should be enough.

Blockquotes: That is already under on-hold-to-fix but will deal with it after everything else it done.

Support Expedition Paragraph: That can be reoorganized. To add to what you said; it was supposed to be "the support expeditions  only work in World 5 and events" since I called the normal support at non-boss node as "Standard support"

Superflous sentence:  That's my bad habit from writing report for some professor. Will get rid of that.

Shelling Damage Calculation Section:  It's being fixed right now, but I was a bit restricted on line when writing that one so summarized it quite a bit.

Although from what I was told right now, the equation only affects CV/CVL while others just calculate based on their Firepower. I did it without any example because a condition for Shelling support was already put in the table where:

Shelling support = 2DD 4XX

where XX cannot be >3CV/CVL, >2DD and > 4CL/CLT

I was convinced that as long as they know the requirement example isn't really needed but I did put 2 DD, 2 BB, 2 CV for the sake of it.

OTHERS:

That aside, a paragraph for Accuracy based on equipment is still in consideration and will probably be added. The support section can still be elaborated if needed.

All those long-broad list aside, again, I really appreciate your comments. If you're going to write another long one can you seperate each topic to multiple lines? It took me a while to read through all that. :p