Thread:Faffylivesforever/@comment-460323-20150507120834/@comment-26135416-20150507124212

  迷彩が厚化粧 - honestly unsure on this one, if you think you got a better handle on it, go with your heart. i feel akitsushima is better anthromophosized if we treat her camouflage pattern as a normal girl's make-up. but if you want to go for precision, by all means.

ね - the previous translation i felt did not emphasize the fact that she was talking to herself / taitei. well, if you think keeping it as "right?" is the right thing to do, you can reverse the changes there. i thought it was quite boring to read the same thing over and over again, obviously, no offense to you. everyone has a different style.

かも - 「かも」って難しいかも. .

the japanese version flows much better as a catchphrase, i felt that akitsushima loses her personality if you translate the kamos in a grammatically sound way.