Talk:General Discussion/@comment-25548706-20141112134410/@comment-24403956-20141112143209

you are just drawing the character in your own style, that is something. imitatung a existing drawing is printing not art. You are doing great. also, the outfit you draw contains quite a sharp edge and corner, this creates a sense of strength. Comparing to the softness we can observe form the original artwork, you cloth seem to be stiff, subsequent it is more tidy and the character is more powerful. I don't know if this is your intention or you haven't finalise the drawing, since half of the drwaing is still in draft. ALso comparing to the kancolle kongou outfit, your outfit is 'thicker', you got a strong edge and bigger shade, this give the audience the feeling that the thickness of the layer is huge. Also the shade of the knot in front of Kongou has the same pattern, and it seem quite heavy. Afterall, Kongou is a battleship, so she can handle it. The good thing is they are consistent, so it make sense. Again, I am not sure is this what you want to represent. Nevertheless, it is not a bad representation. As artist you have your expression on stuffs. I respect you. If you seek for a feedback, I will tell you to ask youself, "is this what you are trying to express?'